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Please edit the poems attached accordingly:
1-)i’ve never told anyone)when you get to the “sounds of my mind at night” line, you might come up with a metaphor or simile to tag on there before moving on to the line about the leaves. + make it a bit longer and interstening
2-(us at the beach)make it longer, add metaphors and poems sounds
3-(December 2017) make it longer, add feelings more, keep the ending
4-(In your mind) Make it a sonnet of these options(Shakespearian, Spenserian, Petrarchan) and make it 14 lines, please state which sonnet is it